【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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! B/ O; v% u* K7 k& ?我另将歌词附在此。
3 G+ _3 A4 M# e- f6 P& }+ ~  RThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ u( d9 \7 [" O- @5 @& u7 V5 @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
% }2 f9 W8 B- f! WWe meet and talk everyday,
9 N5 l$ Z/ V* ^2 X# cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 }  ?! z+ y/ R+ `; q  ^Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 _/ C6 Z7 K: m" M* c- A( i9 k+ a  HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: u' J! {) p& z* o. m+ H8 w/ ^9 b4 JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" ]4 m6 \  q$ wLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 ^9 T4 j# H) b: FBut I never did
' z5 A& z; x8 S  B' ?: i! qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: ?9 [% J( h/ TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% E1 `* R/ h4 n! ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- {* R; W2 H6 I* `# T8 n+ z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 T4 R, m# s$ J<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 W9 l9 E6 u  `6 t$ `<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& O; G# J# ]8 U3 O# {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 [1 h- W0 C8 `<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 n! E: j# i" T0 t8 i) S3 p+ G<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 Z/ |  {; }4 f3 P  H( v9 v) a<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" V' Q( c/ N8 ]<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
$ o' S% Y" }7 j- a+ _' v2 r<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; w) h& S( K$ x1 F8 @. [<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 _0 b- S) o- G7 R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( f# o7 m' `$ J9 n4 d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ J0 c: s; F2 d5 S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ h% a' Y  R" o  e6 N* t$ g0 O# U  Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 n4 H; B+ F/ K7 Q- o% o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 a; g( }  @0 H9 v<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) a9 _' e% F& U# i/ k2 H2 x+ t2 ?<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 q  t5 n( c( c1 C; t1 g<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" p, N9 v  N1 j# Q- e5 L' Q<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. a7 W; Y2 b$ n( L* W# X, q) s/ E4 p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& K1 U, U) n% C2 R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; B& U# ]* Y" y4 \7 F3 H& }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: ], _3 d* m; A. l5 V  X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& v# u5 X$ h! R$ S4 z* y/ u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% U9 P" |$ `+ [) @% r, D9 ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% c' `9 f) g' p! }, N" x3 J" E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 C. J5 v( \( X0 F4 r: z- W<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

. z" D, I& I9 Z1 q. N& I5 z) `1 Q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( w0 \9 x/ {" z" F7 T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>