【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
( @4 x8 B( h0 H/ q$ F# `We meet and talk everyday,
2 ?% G) d) l' ~! }But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ f% k" ^& `! ?! _0 v, vLove… just the word love
/ o# m6 Y) b( u$ h  BWhy is it so difficult to express?
* d4 L$ s: D& r7 Z+ qI want to confess that I love you,
8 d- Z; ^" E- WBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 o+ f! P* H! ~! W# Z  d3 p: iIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 {8 [8 E8 Q2 B7 Z  N$ dEntrust my love within your heart
% H6 a0 \6 \5 W5 o) CLove… just the word love
1 O5 i  Y# b! G, R* Q% X$ G- hWhy is it so difficult to express?
& ?% `! v6 S& L8 II want to confess that I love you,
# s3 E( W/ N2 T, X# tBut I never did
5 M. q$ b  K' E2 bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; b* J# }0 x1 x' C; XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' K8 l7 R  v- UEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 k( y4 _  L: v1 W) g( A* }Entrust my love within your heart
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; t6 B2 S/ h" O* Z0 K[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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4 R6 u' }' a* t6 ^" O( x% j8 \0 W' y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 E  Q9 z3 h$ }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 t) z9 D0 X& u& s* w6 T) D9 U<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% J3 \1 Y8 M2 W& B! A<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 z/ a1 x8 t6 Y$ w; w7 D4 \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ ^9 q7 T4 w& t& E9 W- f9 Q# n7 ]<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 l# e9 j! b/ D1 y; c8 \( Q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* @3 K' P- I  h; e; v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& L& D" m7 \2 X* O  E<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 a* B3 |& [, d, q% }% Y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ X' o5 l& G$ L+ l; K( l* s2 \1 I' t( S<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( ~9 X- N- M- F. V7 P( X# E1 a; d( o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! `  q4 z& H$ s9 o6 u+ |7 @<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 e& d% ~% p2 j3 R<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: r8 j5 ?/ R; B$ J& }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 b( A5 E' c% b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) b9 C+ t0 d& N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 y: h- b; Q& ~4 R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! m' K3 `+ X, A3 S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, E( }& r# N  \* a5 d<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 e6 X9 A8 q: M4 `<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" Q  R. g* C- U2 {) H! s7 G1 {! a; S<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 D1 ~+ n, @6 U  `<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 v$ L' |9 h9 t: l4 r" d! G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- I2 z! ^+ O- b* t# h8 O<P>But I never did </P>
3 I1 v6 W. L1 \  V& C<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" @. J, n, G1 R6 E! W2 u. |# a<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' `* o' R/ D: n" M1 c9 i<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  E. i1 t8 a, ]2 S2 Y" L. m. j+ y+ H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" k/ f; }- [, F4 B+ ]7 y  a# D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  c) V* y) C, I3 m5 H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 }' z/ e& Q/ I) u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' a% Y4 @1 R, [( C8 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ O" K, H9 a+ l: b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ ~9 {- ^( n- v  p, ]6 a<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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8 u' x; m/ y( a& g/ @( a  n" @这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>