【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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- d( L. n6 y$ R+ o4 w7 Q我另将歌词附在此。
* B) k: h0 S6 F0 K) D0 r4 h1 yThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 R; I# c( j5 e! W0 k& H5 yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
$ r9 K! P7 }0 L' |We meet and talk everyday,
6 \: O& M- k, {$ _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 h& S2 i0 |& n  s% j% LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 c' j/ d% \! o7 h5 j/ i7 sI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
& J  B( O2 V5 _! l1 t- z* d  gWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# r! W8 M: A4 E" D4 R3 L9 LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  M2 ~1 B# z1 }- NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% z7 R2 e( w. b/ J7 @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- t( R! v& \' p* W$ q4 W2 |. c% {) EEntrust my love within your heart
4 J$ O; Z1 n% V! c0 A7 H8 fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 u& d( P# s3 G2 S$ k3 PI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 K5 f. Q9 A, I4 b& Q& u9 ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ q4 }' b2 l* l) ^4 QCan I entrust it to you?
' k" |$ D# A6 \/ @2 {" k' HEntrust my love within your heart
$ o1 b3 |1 O' \# E$ l* NCan I entrust it to you?
+ `' m6 @+ ~- G5 NEntrust my love within your heart

( ?* H" B1 P+ m8 A[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

3 g3 o" }" t/ \<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 \0 _8 p. K% q; m8 D+ j3 u<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% E* v" ~( N. X$ _& W: z" H% X2 v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 g" Y6 f  a4 H  R" C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; ~) L6 |0 Y. B<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. H- g8 p9 Y" ]1 G<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 h! ?0 r# ?* }9 s6 J0 y' D<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 {0 C- g# u% W3 j<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 E! }# b( T/ ]" u<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# D, k+ J& @  g" u% i5 W! S<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 e: E2 ?. I1 d( {* E, a) G# t4 T<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( k, R3 {" ]& O& }# \<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: {% S1 Y( W+ x: `1 E) ]( r<P>但我不会</P>
. t; ~; Q$ `# h<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- }0 x% h2 X% B; f<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! X* M, Y2 J4 q+ b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 \# v! |; W8 n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 N1 t! _* t7 d4 k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 j% d. B: Q$ L2 m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 s' ~$ Z4 q1 B4 K' O<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
; k7 V3 u8 _0 D% ~: f7 X<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; R3 F* P, ]7 L  @1 ^7 }% L/ T4 g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ S7 g  W+ t; W# n1 B<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. q' m8 s. V+ S  ~" q/ }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  O3 B6 ?) a. o# w, v, W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 `% E+ q/ I& `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  i) d6 K0 M7 @+ J5 m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  r. U3 @& X) d: h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 @* L) f; \2 K. @# H# L0 v<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 B9 B1 R" V' ]<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 m' K& v6 D; J' K9 Y; y1 P2 | 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 }4 R) K" s+ Q0 [这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 n+ ?0 B3 @% H; ]! y& X<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>