【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
. \/ [2 B) g+ l! c3 s# mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 I  {8 z1 M3 C1 ~3 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 _1 `  A% F4 t0 ?& h& UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, v: Y: Z4 Z# z% `6 m3 I3 S4 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) p, @4 L& h+ h! cI really want to know just how much you love me
5 {/ W5 x) X" V$ N8 D9 [( `6 tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) _1 C# x1 J' |* _! sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 @' v5 }! e' F2 F" a. z+ G! NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! X; g# G( S7 Y. B9 y" D, \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ o4 f5 U9 a, D% dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 d- [7 G8 b2 C  K, Q( ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 ]( _/ q* ?3 X5 V" S& }5 a% H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  D7 }# Q$ ~: d, o; F4 m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 j/ J2 I/ V: m' _3 A  w4 k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, @) f4 q" N, r4 G. F. E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 b2 o" f5 o' p1 ~) R9 S' R6 A( j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 |/ [$ h/ `$ i) R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 Y+ f; u( J2 j" q: }5 f- {. P5 l7 _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 p. O( y8 Y* }+ {! |; P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. O" o% ^% \+ l. e/ o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 P! Q, F4 \7 o% E0 J<P>你无需担心</P>
' ?$ l# H3 r1 [9 D& D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 x) ?2 ]" F1 z% ], t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. a" k# g' w* V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& h; z* k1 o6 ?2 |1 }! Z5 A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ {9 ~5 J9 Z# S' w( [$ H* Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, b9 x9 T5 r- @  K1 u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. m; k/ D+ h& K$ B. h; q8 ?9 ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# J6 x. v2 P; j; t" C9 [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' b3 h0 C, Q$ J% l! |7 m; a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- N2 g1 a9 d" Y( }1 a$ U2 V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" I7 C0 ^0 n+ g; i) w7 n) p+ L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: K- q4 G- J+ |' ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" d- Z" Q7 w) h- g9 `# Z" y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ g# E! [- |5 m& m+ `! g( b1 m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 r. h8 e; {, {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* ?4 h& W' {; F$ G" F: Q# X/ v2 v. z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ m* K2 x! h- F. _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>