【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
; Q. J2 z& p3 c0 H. lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 h! L0 |: }- f- J- Q7 EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, T; J2 Q' R: s4 _) I4 k( o' BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ z5 D6 B, J0 ]5 {7 ?% @7 X8 rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 q, w6 I6 q2 D' ?- w6 g. eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 Q; j/ Z9 P8 q' i; R" AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- J% S7 k  N. j5 ^I love you I love you with all my heart
0 a7 }( v$ b9 }# h5 N/ S5 wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- @4 P8 I8 ?4 J/ G0 Y4 a) n* u. [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 o+ N! w5 I$ Z+ a2 Z- wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 e, ~, J  F5 m! z& bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# w, A4 V7 ]+ ~) W$ [6 ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 d, @4 L) J+ H0 A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 Q+ S7 ?, {0 x) {/ L: _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& A6 y; i0 \! ]) m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. v1 j- z/ D' ?5 s, C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 H+ |  c  K5 d1 _8 X' S% H0 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, x4 X( B! B! h0 A8 B' I0 w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' {9 C7 z, b$ W5 p3 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 `* i4 c( f  Z8 }& t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& H9 @6 q/ M- K8 G+ K( ]<P>你无需担心</P>
4 S* s; z. ^+ p1 {0 R& r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 e$ k6 u# U& Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 n, Y& ^$ h+ L6 w# s  K1 f- S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ {# b; |0 b5 l3 C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* N, Z1 t% ]7 H% r* ~# R* p3 s7 a- e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# Y9 u4 e6 N9 C; [  W' K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! x" T3 |8 @7 U- ]( O- o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ ?" @" h. V9 b7 \* M: l% y" {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  |" \6 C9 L* }' _- @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 l: Y# A- w! M# D5 v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ O3 q7 B7 R: s  Z6 s; M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 {; c) C, A, J# x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 y; {# q. Z; u" {! H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* `% `9 B$ G% _! K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

9 L/ P2 w' ?- B. R5 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! ]! l/ T6 X$ B; R* h  n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>