【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: j+ [2 T, J! ?歌词我附在后面。
. D) v. Y$ V( u% vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 |: M1 u; K# l& g& T- NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 @* z$ a2 U  ?* eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  @6 e  t7 k# [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% z' E& a4 l3 c8 J  S( pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* d; |$ u  ^/ O( RSeeing the sky content with its love
8 w$ I  g4 I$ J' v' D5 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 l5 h$ Y% k- [. MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% n9 h* V7 M. Y9 ^# |8 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& f: @' \8 G: l+ l7 H4 gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 a5 |; Y5 ~; @5 c" aI regret not dying
9 L& b$ `  ]0 H( F; aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) _& G3 N9 J' k8 sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 `4 J: ]7 U. P5 @' BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 j. ^0 P% b- s6 ]8 ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 _2 s* _. t/ X3 U: w7 h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* Z4 a# h/ c7 B9 z6 C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 C8 V, Y; z5 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% T% e) H& S- L0 s/ K- p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 p) U' u' r3 ~7 E1 O# a, w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 [& H) u: Y0 i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% B0 i3 u$ s. P' c+ W+ k5 ]! a- @' k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 @$ @4 f1 d* a- f/ `+ O& v$ t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( k' _% L+ U) i. v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ a' u$ v* K# V8 }+ T  ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 A5 ?! N4 Q+ b% a4 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# ?/ z0 M' H0 h  k. {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ L' K4 j, |3 l8 A. [* |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- x( V  ^5 v* `2 r* g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( \& F' Q) n' g" a/ ^' ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ p5 q5 Z: D& x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 G% U* q- Z9 f# B5 `, {/ O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; J5 m' J" b% Q( f0 i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; O0 l& P5 d- r- h. l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  Y. \3 g' g: W! Q9 B1 c* W我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- ]/ {( X% h% H+ I/ ~0 I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>