【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  `' g6 u1 k6 F) K. kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& s5 A4 Y' B# X* L, L( [/ Q, @; H9 p: i) _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 Q+ |% @7 F3 S- w& c9 L# b7 \I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 p7 ~7 G, @" T6 Q! Y) dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) L) c: e, X7 DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ W1 K7 a' E4 z1 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  W1 {" U* n1 [9 P' S4 S1 ^I regret not dying
3 }  ~, ~  B9 B3 m0 T6 b1 A) II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 q- D* u! K* D" P, zWith such a tongue as yours,
6 g8 S0 \. a0 h+ j! M# CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" z$ U+ P/ \2 [  C/ Y1 I  pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. t' s% R" @4 t8 G& ^' [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 `* F3 X* a/ V9 o" @! j  t! p' {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& Y5 z/ z1 r+ J8 ~. t  y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% q$ e- J/ h5 z# ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 k2 d. g3 y1 |9 ~' |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: m& K5 C7 K* V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' l4 I% O1 a9 y: e* P' h2 S- @* W9 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. j8 D( d2 s( ~0 C  ~2 F, Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ I) Y8 g4 i+ V  U/ o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 J; P' d1 |  ~% S4 w. q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; S9 I, ]' x2 ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 c, E  `- K! s5 ~- ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 Q$ ~- Q# U  G. F/ Z/ I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  L/ {$ ~" N9 J. M! e, `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 V# V9 }( q/ j3 L, R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: O& C( f  s1 o8 I# j, D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 v! P- U1 q3 B9 e! r: R  ^$ ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! C! m( z9 H) B7 ~: S  y: ~* C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- M6 o4 X$ Z4 M* |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& \- H* t* e6 x3 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
: g3 q& s( _! s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: s  z' ]$ @' G& ^+ x4 \5 j7 `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 r4 ^4 ?$ H6 S: z3 ?" G7 j% }! j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* \! Y6 V5 @1 s/ ?$ E4 _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 E  q7 {: ~. N' A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>